Yes, i have changed the format of my posts. Not only am I rewriting the story from the very beginning, but I'm also adding in new segments to clarify things, called "How Things Work". At this point, you've seen four of them - the government, military, Ameyura, and a chart with all the Kings of Norea on it. I plan on making more, as the series progresses, but i won't always be able to do a segment like that, so i'm considering doing interviews with characters and using those as well. Also, at the end of chapters, you see "A Quick Look At~" which briefly summarizes one character, this far in the series and with my own unknowable-to-anyone-else-knowledge. This may also eventually give way to another short segment, maybe a "Where Are They Now?" sort of thing? Only the future will tell! Speaking of the future telling, to enrich the storytelling (I hope) I've been posting "previews" of next week's chapter in each chapter. Do you think those are working? Should they just be dropped? I would love to recieve feedback!
P.S. Do you guys enjoy the rewritten chapters?? I know they're different thematically from the pilot, "Led Away". As the story progresses, the rewrite and original chapters will probably start getting even more similar, since my writing improved. Personally, i couldn't stand my original few chapters, and can actually almost enjoy these. Thanks for reading!
P.P.S. I also changed several details about the blogs design! Do you like it??
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